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Collaborative Comic: Torpedo Rock: Detective for Hire

posted by tredlow on - last edited by Jennifer - Viewed by 7.1K users
Basic rules, been done in most forums; I make a page of a comic, and then the next poster makes the next one continuing it. GO.

Oh, right. Here's the first one.

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Yeah, yeah. I suck at art. GO.
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  • I don't have a way to draw and upload something but I wish to contribute, this is what I was able to come up with

    Torpedo: (Frantically) What!? Where are you taking me!? Why don't I have a gun!?

    Killum: I'm taking you to my otherworldly goo processing plant, you could say it's a world of goo.

    Torpedo: (Calmer) I'm surprised in you.

    Killum: That I actually told you?

    Torpedo: No, That you made that awful joke.

    (Killum points his gun at torpedo, Torpedo puts his hands up)

    Killum: (enraged) If I didn't need you alive for this process I would shoot you right where you stand!

    Torpedo: Damn, I need some sort of diversion, and fast!

    (Hovercar back doors slam open, revealing a Torpedo shaped silhouette)

    RoboTorpedo: Why are you turning people into goo!?
  • Remolay;517085 said:
    I don't have a way to draw and upload something but I wish to contribute, this is what I was able to come up with

    Torpedo: (Frantically) What!? Where are you taking me!? Why don't I have a gun!?

    Killum: I'm taking you to my otherworldly goo processing plant, you could say it's a world of goo.

    Torpedo: (Calmer) I'm surprised in you.

    Killum: That I actually told you?

    Torpedo: No, That you made that awful joke.

    (Killum points his gun at torpedo, Torpedo puts his hands up)

    Killum: (enraged) If I didn't need you alive for this process I would shoot you right where you stand!

    Torpedo: Damn, I need some sort of diversion, and fast!

    (Hovercar back doors slam open, revealing a Torpedo shaped silhouette)

    RoboTorpedo: Why are you turning people into goo!?
    Alright. And I'm putting my page in the same page as well.

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  • I've returned! NOW LIVE YOU COMIC! LIIIIIIIIIIIIIVE!
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  • ... That wouldn't happen to be Carmen Sandiego in the third panel down, would it?
  • Whoo! You're back! Also, awesome page! Eve now kinda reminds me of Eva from Grim Fandango.

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  • Keeping it short but sweet, also glad someone spotted ma cameo :D
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    Also thanks MediEvil 2 soundtrack for the inspiration for the page.
  • Wow, that's awesome! I always love a Lovecraftian angle.

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    Another thing I always love, as you can see, are silhouettes.
  • Sorry I havn't added anything for a few days, I got distracted by something and fell out of routine.
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  • Heey! Welcome back!
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    I think I'm getting the hang of MS Painting.
  • I guess Mr. Mummiman and Stan shop at the same fabric store... :D
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