Holly's sister missing?
In Episode 1 Grendel and Holly mention that Holly's sister Lily had been missing for "weeks" but in Episode 2 after you tell Holly about Lily being dead and glamored as Snow, she immediately tells you where Lily worked. She gives details about Georgie and how she was under his thumb.
It's suspicious to me that Holly knew where she worked and never found her. Seriously? Lily had to show up to the Pudding and Pie eventually. How did Holly never find her?