Our Own Episode 4

edited March 2014 in The Walking Dead

Let's do this! Continuation from Our Own Episode 3

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    Clementine proceeds to apply Carver's blood as warpaint.

    Bah, we're continuing from something? :S

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    SPOILERS BELOW If you haven't read Episode 3. Here is a link. http://www.telltalegames.com/community/discussion/63900/our-own-episode-3

  • We are continuing from Our own episode 3 so check that out before you comment here.

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    EDIT: Misinformed, mods please delete.

  • Here is a question that hasn't been brought up.

    Where is Shel and Wyatt?

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    (Recap from the end of Episode 3 before Tyranitor posts.)

    There sat Clem, Kenny, Sarah, Nick, Carlos and Sarita locked in their sell...

    Clem: We have to get out of here

    Carlos: Thats impossible, he will just hunt us down and bring as back again..

    Nick: Lets just accept that its over

    Kenny: NO clems right, (sigh) that son of a bitch would of shot walt no matter what we did.. well i ain't going out like that.. not without a fight..

    Clem: Im worried about Luke.. I hope hes alright...

    Nick: So Kenny?? You were the last one with Luke when you both ran to fix the generator.. What happened?

    Kenny: As soon as Carver came he started whining to me that there was no chance and to find a way to get him later.. I told him to take a hike.. i wasn't leaving without Sarita..

    Nick: How can we trust you huh?? whose to say after that little argument at the table you killed him when he was alone?

    Kenny: Kid are you fucking nuts, i didn't kill anyone he ran off??

    Nick: And your a fucking liar! just admit it!

    Kenny: SHUT THE FUCK UP BEN!

    Sarita gasped : Kenny! stop please just calm down..

    Clementine looked at kenny and he looked at her knowing that he did it again...and sunk his face into his hands...

    Nick:... My name aint Ben...

    Everyone went silent and just didnt talk for a while.

    Suddenly everyone in the cell heard the whole camp erupt in panic... And they could also hear machine gun firing out of the camp and into the forest..

    Nick: What the fuck is going on!!

    Carlos: I dont know... It cant be people.. no other group would dare attack Carver would they??

    Sarah hearing the gunfire started to panic

    Clem: Ill take a look

    Clem peeked out of the window and saw hundreds of them... Walkers.. all heading towards the camp.. She could hear Carver shouting orders from below.. But she also saw a little figure in front of the walkers.. She recognised him... she recognised that orange shirt anywhere... IT WAS LUKE

    (episode 3 ends.)

  • I was planning to introduce them in Luke's new group that is attacking Carver

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    The Walking Dead: Amid The Ruins

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    Clem: It's Luke!

    Nick: Holy shit!

    Carlos: Now how the hell are we going to get out of he-

    Bonnie, Becca, and Eddie enter the room

    Bonnie: We're here to help! I saw what Bill did to that poor man. I'm not just gonna let him get away with that shit!

    Kenny: What the hell is this piece of shit doing here!

    Eddie: Listen man, I'm sorry, but we gotta go!

    The group is now well equipped with weapons and is ready to head outside

    2 Hours Earlier

    Shel: We can NOT do that!

    Wyatt: Yeah man, our friends could be in there.

    Luke: Then we won't shoot them! Look it's a win-win situation for both of us. I find my friends and you find your friends

    Shel: Not to mention the walker horde we are bringing down on them

    Luke: Look you can either help me, or walk away!

    Shel: (sigh) I guess I'm in. Russel? Wyatt?

    Russel: Of course!

    Wyatt: It's a shot at finding Eddie, so yeah.

    Luke: Let's move out

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    Disregard

  • Dupe this comment after Legendary12's comment so it makes more sense.
    You can just edit this one and type Disregard or .

  • Oh, Legendary removed his..

  • Ill retype it hang on.

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    Kenny: Alright, everyone when we go through those doors we stick together and cover each other, Clem you stick to me like Glue.

    Nick: Luke is probably waiting for us outside the camp, we gotta get out of here and meet up with him!

    Carlos: Sounds Like a plan, Sarah stay close

    Sarah: Aren't you going to give me a gun?

    Carlos: NO! its too dangerous Clem can cover you.

    Sarah didn't even bother trying to argue.

    Kenny: Alright lets get a move on

  • Ok retyped, just do what tyranitor said.

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    Originally posted bytrtu2d2

    The group runs outside

    Luke sees Clementine, Kenny, Eddie, Bonnie, Carlos, Nick and Sarita and smiles.

    Nick runs towards Luke but Carver points a gun at him.

    Carver : Not so fast, I can't have you running off like that can I, especially with traitors.

    Eddie sees Wyatt standing next to Luke

    Eddie : My god, I thought you were dead!

    Luke : Where's Shel?

    Becca : Shel? She's alive!

    Meanwhile Clementine has snuck up onto the roof and she shoots Carver in the leg.

    Carver screams in pain as he is shot.

    The others are alerted by the gunshot as Clementine pushes Carver off of the roof

    Wyatt : Jesus!

    Eddie : She killed him!

    Carver : I..I'm not tha..that.. dead y.. yet..

    Carver makes an attempt to stand but falls straight away

    Carlos : Rebecca!

    Carlos runs back inside and brings Rebecca out

    Troy runs to the roof and holds Clementine hostage

    Troy : I knew you lot were good fer nothin'!

    Kenny : Clementine!

    Sarah gasps

    Troy gets a hole in his forehead

    The group looks at Luke aiming the gun

    Clementine pushes Troy's dead body off of her.

    Luke and Wyatt run to the group and they go inside

    They barricade the doors

  • Getting off for now. The story is getting good! :)

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    Carlos: Clementine! Find anything you can to block the door and windows!

    Clementine: Sure.

    Carlos: And... you! (Looking at Eddie) Find weapons!

    Eddie: I'm as straight as my dick!

    Carlos: Nick! Nick? Where is Nick?!

    Nick goes out through the back window.

  • i have no idea what the hell is going on

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    Luke: NICK get the fuck back here man!!

    Carlos: Goes and looks down and sees Nick at the bottom of the outer wall of the camp signalling Carlos to find a way out and pick him up on the way, nick then ran as guards were closing in on him.

    Rebecca: MY BABY He's still got my baby, I'm Not leaving without my baby!

    Luke: We will get your baby back I promise!

    Wyatt Eddie Bonnie and Becca were guarding the barricaded windows

    Wyatt: SHIT!

    Carver and his men were outside, carver knew he had them pinned down in that little room

    Carver: YOU SHOULD'VE AIMED FOR MY HEAD GIRL! NOW TELL REBECCA TO GET OUT HERE AND GIVE UP AND I WILL MAKE SURE YOU ALL SUFFER QUICK!

    Clem: what are we going to do now?

    Eddie: we don't got much ammo so lets make it last against these guys

    Kenny: If these guys want a fight they are gonna get one

    WYATT: FUCK WE GOT ABOUT 5 MINS TILL ALL THOSE WALKERS GET HERE.

    Kenny: Sarita pass me my rifle, I'm gonna go to the top level of this room and give us some cover

    Clem: be careful kenny!

    Kenny: Don't worry clem ( Kenny heads upstairs)

    Wyatt, Eddie, Sarita, Luke, Carlos, Bonnie, Becca and Clem all start to fire their weapons outside the windows directly at carver and his men. Carvers men start to return fire.

  • Is it allowed to add our own characters to the story?

  • With everyone shooting back and forth at each other, no one on Clems side had been shot. They got really lucky.

    Lucky up until the end of the battle.

    Right when it had seemed like victory was there's, a shot goes piercing into Sarita's arm.

    Sarita: "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"

    Kenny: "SHIT! SOMEONE HELP ME HELP HER... SHE NEEDS FUCKING HELP I'M NOT LETTING HER DIE!"

    Kenny, Bonnie, Becca, Carlos, and Clementine begin to help Sarita, while Wyatt, Eddie, and Luke continue firing.

    BAM Eddie: "AW FUCKING FUCKER FUCKING FUCK! THEY SHOT MY FUCKING FINGER OFF!"

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    Wyatt: EDDIE! Hang on! (he goes to help him)

    Luke: EVERYONE! GET THE FUCK HERE. NOW!

    Kenny: My girl is going to DIE if we do!

    (everyone except Kenny and Clementine start firing)

    Kenny: Clem! Get the fuck over here!

    Clem: I'll... I'll help.

    Sarita: It hurts... It really does...

    Kenny: Hang in there, Sarita.

    Carver: You have two options. Either give up and stay alive, or shoot and DIE!

    Wyatt: We can't give up!

    Eddie: STOP THE FIRE! My fuckin' finger...

    Carlos: Not going to happen.

    Luke: We'll die if we give up!

    Kenny: We're not giving up! Not yet!

    Sarita: Give up. Please.

    Becca: NO.

    Sarah: Dad! GIVE UP.

    Rebecca: NOT GOING TO HAPPEN.

    Bonnie: You don't know Carver. He'll hunt us down. Give up.

    Kenny: Clementine, you've got the final vote.

    Clementine: Me?!

    • PEOPLE'S CHOICE -
    1. Give up and satisfy Carver.
    2. Keep on firing, and make Carver really mad.

      People that want to give up: Carver, Eddie, Sarita, Bonnie, Sarah

      People that want to continue firing: Carlos, Luke, Kenny, Becca, Rebecca, Wyatt

    • POLL CLOSED -

      Result: 5 - 0 - Continue firing at Carver is ultimately the winner!

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    Clem: We have to return fire! its the only way.

    Luke: Its the best chance of us getting outta here alive.

    Kenny: If im gonna die today, i aint gonna die like a dog, Sarita! get behind the counter with Rebecca and keep your head down.

    Sarita: O... ok kenny..

    Eddie: Fuuuck.. it hurts

    Wyatt: You sure you can keep going?

    Eddie: Looks like i will just have to fire with my middle finger i guess...

    Wyatt: Alright if you start feeling faint just get down.

    Clementine peeked out of the window and saw carver.. He was looking to his left and had a concerned look on his face... Clem could then hear the faint roars of all the hundreds of walkers.. Carver knew they were coming..

    Clem: THE WALKERS ARE JUST ABOUT HERE GUYS!

    Bonnie: SHIT, well if we aint giving up its now or never...

    (Group starts firing back and carvers men then return fire)

    Carver screams out during the gunfire "I THOUGHT YOU GUYS WERE SMARTER THAN THAT, NOW IM GONNA MAKE SURE YOU ALL SUFFER SLOW, Carver signals one of his guards " Take the baby up to the 3rd floor, now go!

    (a few minutes pass and Clems group start to get overwhelmed..)

    Kenny starts firing as much as he can in the direction of Carvers men trying to pin them down.. He then throws his rifle on the ground... "Fuck.... Guys... Im... Im outta ammo"

    Luke: SHIT

    Becca: WE CANT KEEP THIS UP!

    Carlos: We have to find a way out of here! What about the window nick jumped out of?

    Luke: its no use! his men are have circled around and are guarding that area!

    Kenny: SHIT!

    (suddenly the gunfire stops)

    Carver comes out into the open

    Carver: BONNIE! WYATT!

    Clem peeks out of the window

    Clem: Hes got some young guy in front of him with his wrists tied up

    Bonnie: Is he... is he asian?

    Clem: yea...

    Eddie: FUCK THEY GOT VINCE!

    Wyatt: Vince is here too???

    Carver: NOW COME ON OUT IF YOU WANT TO MAKE THIS EASY!

    suddenly the barricades of carvers camp burt wide open.. and all the walkers swarm in! Clem can hear carvers men firing at them and scattering around outside trying to avoid the walkers.. but there are just too many!

    Vince uses this opportunity while carver is distracted to get up and sprint for the door Clems group is in

    Clem: HES COMING

    Bonnie: OPEN THE DOOR NOW

    Kenny: CAN WE EVEN TRUST THIS GUY

    Eddie: JUST OPEN IT!

    Clem opens the door and vince dives in and falls on the ground.. clem quickly shuts the door.

    Vince: Hey guys he says almost as a joke as he is panting on the ground.

    Bonnie: God i thought you were a goner out there!

    Vince: Eddie any chance you get these ropes off my hands?

    Eddie: On it!

    suddenly an RV bursts through carvers camp running over a few walkers on the road and comes right in front of the room clems group is in!

    Kenny: FUCK! ITS MORE OF CARVERS MEN

    Luke: SHIT SHIT!

    Becca looks through the window and sees the RV door fling open.. she sees a very familiar head.

    Becca: GUYS... Its.. ITS SHEL!!

    Shel: BECCA! EVERYONE JUST GET IN NOW

    Luke looked to realise Nick was also in the RV and came to the conclusion that he must have found shel when he escaped.

    Nick: ITS OK GUYS YOU CAN TRUST HER, NOW GET IN COME ON!

    Everyone started to load in to the rv with gunshots firing everywhere

    Rebecca: WE CANT LEAVE! MY BABY IS STILL OUT THERE!

    Clem: Its on the third floor! I heard him say it!

    Kenny: LOOK i know that baby i important to you, but we seriously need to get the fuck outta here now!

    Luke: Listen! ill go to the third floor and get the baby for you!

    Clem: Im going with you!

    Kenny: HANG on Clem, thats too dangerous for you!

    Clem: I can do it

    Kenny: You better keep her safe kid..

    Luke: Dont worry shes in good hands.. alright lets go!

    Shel: HURRY, I cant be waiting here too long...

    All the rest of the group stay at the RV and start firing at the walkers and the rest of carvers men while Clem and luke go to find the baby.

  • kind of reminded me of the survivors vs the saviors

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    On the backyard of Carver's camp

    Luke: Clem, whatever happens, don't shoot, don't scream... We can't get caught.

    Clem: I'm not dumb.

    Luke: I know, I know. (Luke sees a hole in the camp's wall) Hey, Clem!

    Clem: Shhh!

    Luke: Can you get through that hole?

    Clem: Maybe.

    Luke: Okay. I'll guard you.

    (Clem starts crawling through the hole)

    Luke: Oh, shit... Ah....

    Clem: What is it?

    Luke: Just...a wound. Carver almost killed me, you know.

    Carver: And I still can!

    Luke: Oh, shit! Clem! Just... keep going...

    Carver: You're not going away, girl!

    Clem: Luke!

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    Carver and Luke immediently begin to brawl

    Luke: GET THROUGH THAT HOLE NOW!

    Clem starts squeezing through the hole, carver tries to grab clems legs to Pull her back out but he is grabbed by Luke and pulled away from her, clem manages to make it to the other side and could hear Luke and carver fighting.

    Luke yelled out to clem while he was fighting carver on the other side of the wall.

    Luke: GET THE BABY AND GET TO THE RV! ILL CATCH UP

    Carver: THE HELL YOU WILL

    Clem then proceeded through the area of the camp which was deserted as most of carvers men were occupied with shels RV and the walkers on the other side of the camp.

    Clem could see the 3rd floor room where the baby had to be, she proceeded.

  • She grabs the baby quickly, and rushes back down the stairs. She then approaches the room where Carver and Luke were fighting.

    Clem: "Luke!"

    She sees Carver strangling Luke. He was having his last breaths. When he looked over at Clem, his eyes had said it all.

    Clementine didn't know what to do. A small revolver layed on a shelf across from her.

    There was no way she could shoot Carver while holding the baby.

    HUGE CHOICE:

    Risk putting the baby down, so you can save Luke.

    Or,

    Rush back to the RV.

  • how can i make a vote for a decision sorry im new :)

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  • Winner: Risk putting the baby down, so you can save Luke. 5 - 4

    Clementine quickly places the baby down, and takes the revolver.

    She shoots at Carver, but misses.

    Luke: Clem... RUN!

    Carver: You can't do it!

    Clementine aims again at Carver, and shoots at his arm.

    Carver: AAGGHHH!

    Luke gets away from Carver.

    Luke: Clem! Come!

    Carver: The HELL you will!

    Carver aims at the baby.

    Clementine: DON'T.

    Luke: Woah, woah.

    Carver: Stay right there.

    Luke: Shooting your own baby. Laughable. It will be our loss, yeah. But it will be YOURS, too.

    Suddendly a character appears behind Carver.

  • fuck the mother

  • I really want to add to the story but im afraid that people wouldn't like it. D:

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