Forum Of The Dead (Story Is Finished!)

edited February 2016 in Forum Games
Welcome to the "Forum Of The Dead" interactive story!

In this thread, you guys will be the characters in a zombie apocalypse, similar to what Harpadarpa and Raging_Blades were doing(Harp left and stopped his) and you will get to vote on everyone's destiny by making choices like in TWD game when you pick an option. The story adapts to the choices you make, the story is tailored by how you vote, so choose wisely! I was going to do this around the same time Harp did his story, but since he started first I decided not to go with it, but since then, him and Raging have inspired me.

THE STORY IS FINISHED! I WANT TO THANK EVERYONE WHO PARTICIPATED, THIS WOULDN'T HAVE BEEN THE STORY IT WAS WITHOUT EVERYONE AND THEIR CHARACTERS!

FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO WANT TO CATCH UP ON THE STORY, ALL OF THE 5 CHAPTERS ARE AVAILABLE TO READ ON GOOGLE DOCS. THE LINK IS JUST BELOW THIS POST! vvvv

docs.google.com/document/d/10IS2QBpLFn-MwGZT1rVqAYAcqmEcJG1X5pvNzWI477E/edit
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  • edited November 2015
    For now I'm looking for 20 people to be in the story, first come, first serve. I will use your username so it can be easier for others to identify you. Just answer these questions if you want to have your character in the story. I'll start off with mine.

    LeeTheProfessional

    Whats your personality like? Sarcastic, witty, brave, calm, cool and collective, like to joke around and make people laugh, sometimes I can be very serious though. Doesn't judge anyone, will be friends with just about anybody. Willing to help those in need.

    Are you willing to sacrifice yourself in order to protect your family/friends? Yes. If I need to, I will do so.

    If you had to do something evil to keep yourself alive, (killing a friend, stealing something, torturing someone) would you? It would be hard, usually I would say no, but If the other person tells me to do it and it's what they want, then I might have to.

    What did you want to be when you were growing up? Police officer, SWAT, Hitman.

    Do you think it's safer to be alone or with a group? I'm usually the Lone-Wolf, but I don't mind sticking with a team that can communicate and have each other's backs. I'm a born leader but don't really like the leadership role unless I absolutely have to do it.

    THAT IS ALL. PLEASE REPLY TO THIS COMMENT AND ANSWER THE QUESTIONS IF YOU WANT TO BE IN THE STORY. REMEMBER FIRST COME, FIRST SERVE. ALL SPOTS ARE FILLED, NO MORE NEW CHARACTERS! BUT LATER ON I'LL PROBABLY NEED MORE, SO DON'T BE DISAPPOINTED IF YOU DON'T MAKE IT IN THE STORY THE FIRST TIME AROUND.
  • edited May 2014
    Chapter One: A REAL NIGHTMARE

    LeeTheProfessional

    It was a warm and quiet night, the moon in the sky was bright and everything seemed peaceful. I was on a train heading back home, I noticed a man coughing loudly a few seats in front of me. He stood up and looked around. The man appeared pale and sickly, his eyes were bloodshot red and he was also sweating profusely. His wife was yelling at him, telling him to take his heart pills while she followed him into the restroom. I took a look outside the window and noticed a big cloud of black smoke in the distance where the city was. Before I could think about what was happening a loud scream was heard coming from the restroom that the couple entered a bit earlier.

    "What the hell is going on?!" A young man said.

    "I don't know, let's check it out." An older fellow replied with a concerned look.

    Everyone watched in silence as the two got ready to open the door. They tried turning the knob but it was locked. The older guy then proceeding to kick the door down, as soon as he did there was a look of surprise on his face.

    "Get the fuck off of her!" he yelled as he entered the bathroom and tried to pull the other guy off of the woman.

    The older gentleman got closer but as he did, the man in the bathroom grabbed him and took a big chunk off his neck. Everyone started panicking and screaming as they saw the horror before them. The guy was ripping the mans stomach open with his bare-hands and eating his intestines. The younger man ran back and couldn't believe what he was seeing. A door opened and the train operator came out.

    "What's going on here? What's with all that scream-" before he could finish his sentence he noticed the man eating another guy's organs.

    "Hey! Get off of him you freak!" He yelled as he ran up to the guy.

    The train operator grabbed him and tried to pull him off, but he suffered the same fate as the older gentleman and got his throat ripped out. Everyone ran to the back of the train in a panic. There were three dead people and a crazy guy was eating them. He turned around and saw everyone running back, his eyes were opened wide and he was slowly heading towards the young man who tried to help before. I looked behind the lunatic and noticed his wife coming out of the bathroom, she was covered in blood with her organs hanging out.

    I thought to myself. "Are these... Zombies?"

    I knew about them from movies and T.V. shows. I knew that the head would be their vulnerable spot. I looked around for any type of weapon, but the only thing I could find was an umbrella. The young man ran up to me.

    "Let's get out here, man!" He said.

    "We have to try to stop the train. They appear to be Zombies, if we destroy their brain, then maybe we can stop them." I replied.

    He gave me a shocked look. "Are you nuts?! Even if you do kill them, do you even know how to stop this train?"

    "No idea, kid. But we have to do something. What's your name? I'm LeeTheProfessional, and you?"

    "TWDFan86. Look we can't stay here, but If you're right about this, then maybe we can do something." He said with a serious look on his face like all his fear had disappeared.

    The train was moving fast and there was no time to waste. The two walkers were heading towards us, I needed to make a choice.

    1) Try and kill the walkers, and stop the train.
    2) Run to the back of the train with everyone else.
    3) Look, kid. we can kill them, but I'll need your help.

    VOTING FOR THIS PART CLOSED!
  • edited May 2014
    Richmond1226--->Try and kill Walkers and stop the train
  • CornPopperCornPopper Banned
    edited May 2014
    1. calm, quiet, psychotic, too smart for his own good
    2.no
    3.hell yes
    4.an architect
    5. alone
  • 3 and you just inspired me to write my own stories :)
  • I'll just walk in here and take a part.
  • P.S this could have went into my create your own Walking Dead stories thread. They deleted it tho. There wasn't even porn or anything in it yet. I gave you upvotes. I like this thread :)
  • edited May 2014
    If you want to vote, please reply to the comment that has the choices, that way we can avoid making a mess. Thanks! :)

    I WILL NOT COUNT YOUR VOTE IF IT IS A RANDOM COMMENT!
  • IF YOU WANT YOUR CHARACTER TO HAVE A PART, PLEASE REPLY TO THE COMMENT THAT HAS THE QUESTIONS.
  • I said 3 but Ole well guess mine doesn't count
  • I'll be Brave,Calm,serious killing on walker
    Helping Family/Friends
    I want to have a group
    I want to be Swat on story

    And in story they can call me Rich
  • 1. Sarcastic, witty, and can be mean but means well most of the time. Lacking in social skills.
    2. I would like to think so. Least I wouldn't go out like a punk bitch.
    3. I wouldn't be ready and willing, but if it was absolutely necessary, I would.
    4. I wish I had an answer for that. Guess I considered teacher at one point.
    5. A group is best, as long as it's a group who can get along.
  • Don't worry, Just reply to my comment that has the choices and I'll count it. :p
  • edited May 2014
    Name: Clayton Boylan
    Skills: Took Krav Maga, knows minor First Aid, good negotiator (and a good liar, but doesn't lie often, only to make others have hope), can pick locks (if he has the necessary pick-lock set), took some survivalist training. Speaks English and Arabic fluently, and speaks a little bit of Turkish and Russian. Practiced parkour before the apocalypse.
    Weaknesses: He's not the greatest at shooting, doesn't like risking lives (he will prefer to risk his own), smokes weed when stressed out, kind of anti-social and feels weird when talking to people he doesn't know (though in an argument about saving someone, will speak up in order to protect them). Will get headaches quite often, and will smoke weed to get rid of it.
    Personality: Optimistic, intelligent, open-minded. Good with calm kids and adults he knows and likes, but bad with loud people or people he doesn't know. Sarcastic at times. Doesn't like it when children swear. Doesn't like hurting people.
    Background: He grew up in a military family, who all died before the apocalypse. Used to work as a gas station attendant. Volunteered at a local Primary school. He enjoyed Ottoman history. His favorite music artist is Tupac Shakur.
    Age: 17
    Ethnicity: Russian American
    What he looks like: My profile picture
  • 1. Quiet, snarky, pessimistic, easily upset.
    2. Only if I knew for sure that it was the only way.
    3. Yes, but not if I didn't have to.
    4. When I was little, an astronaut.
    5. Alone, but I think it's also important to have friends who can help you.
  • You're a pessimist and I'm an optimist. WE SHALL BE MORTAL ENEMIES!
  • Lol, I actually have an idea for your character already. B]
  • edited May 2014
    3) Look, kid, we can kill them, but I'll need your help.
  • 3) GET OFF YOUR ASS KID AND FIND A WEAPON!!!
  • 1)Try and kill the walkers,and stop the train.
  • 3) Look, kid. we can kill them, but I'll need your help.
  • Alright, guys. I'm going offline, but for those of you who want to join just reply to the comment above that has the questions, I will only accept the first remaining people that I need. Please vote as well by replying to the first part of the story, the more people vote the faster I can start writing the next parts. Don't vote by making a random comment, that way we can keep from making a mess, thank you!
  • To vote please reply to the first part of the story, not just a random comment. I'll accept your vote as a comment to the thread this once, though. B]
  • Me or CornPopper? Also, sorry LeeTheProfessional, I updated my character, personality, background, etc.
  • I saw others do this, so I thought it's what you do :/. I'm sorry kind Lee
  • Fight to the death?
  • edited May 2014
    Clayton Boylan----- 1) Try and kill the walkers, and stop the train.
  • edited May 2014
    personality: The guy who does the stuff that needs to be done, without fearing the consequences. I appear cold and stoic and use people's fear of me to keep them in line. Though I act like a heartless bastard, I actually care about people close to me, but I don't show it all too well. I keep the image of a capable man in front of others, but question my actions when I am by myself or people I trust to keep my weak side a secret. I am the type to sacrifice people "for the greater good" as long as it isn't a person I care too much for (e.g. family, girlfriend). I know the sins I commit will eventually be my downfall, but I accepts that fate and choose to fight until I can't anymore.

    willing to sacrifice for family/friends: only on last resort and only if the people are very important to me. If I don't care about them, I will let them die and if I can use someone else's death to save who is important to me, I will do that as well.

    doing evil to survive: absolutely.

    what I wanted to do when I was young: I was undecided

    alone or group? I would rather go for the group, but since people tend to dislike my character, I will probably be alone most of the time. Especially since I like to take charge and people often end up questioning my methods. When I am a leader, I tend to try keeping most alive with whatever methods possible, though I am willing to make sacrifices if there is no other way. I would even save people who I dislike, though there is a limit of how much shit I can take from someone. If I deem someone too much of a nuisance/asshole or possibly even a danger to the group, I will dispose of them. The safety of the group goes above all.
  • Pro: 3) Look, kid. we can kill them, but I'll need your help.
  • Quiet but will help if you need it
    Yes
    It depends. If the person is actually asking me to do it.
    A chef
    Even though I'm quiet, it is best that we are in a good group that can work together no matter the situation.
  • edited May 2014
    How about fight to the pain? To the pain means the first thing you will lose will be your feet below the ankles. Then your hands at the wrists. Next your nose. The next thing you will lose will be your left eye followed by your right. Your ears you keep and I'll tell you why. So that every shriek of every child at seeing your hideousness will be yours to cherish. Every babe that weeps at your approach, every woman who cries out, "Dear God! What is that thing?" will echo in your perfect ears. That is what to the pain means. It means I leave you in anguish, wallowing in freakish misery forever. It's possible, I might be bluffing. It's conceivable, you miserable, vomitous mass, that I'm only lying here because I lack the strength to stand. But, then again... perhaps I have the strength after all.
  • 3) Look, kid. we can kill them, but I'll need your help.
  • Welcome_to_Woodbury: Look, kid, we can kill them, but I'll need your help.

    (Hey, I'm back)
  • TWDFan86: 3)Look, kid. we can kill them, but I'll need your help.

    "Kid", huh? lol. Yeah, I'm still a kid :P
  • Think he's at work or school or something.
  • Probably. I gotta go soon too anyway, just wanted to let him know I'm still in the show =)
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